This poem wasn't open in a tab, so it's sort of cheating on my project, but since I made up the rules myself I guess I can break them. I took some photos this week of cleaning supplies on our campus, and that made me think of this Pablo Neruda poem I had saved on my hard drive. I don't know if the Chilean brooms he was thinking of are similar to our Haitian ones, but I love - and relate to - the way he expresses how he feels useless because he doesn't work with his hands.
Guilty
Pablo Neruda, tr. John Felstiner
I declare myself guilty of not having
made, with these hands they gave me,
a broom.
Why did I make no broom?
Why did they give me hands?
What use have they been
if all I ever did was
watch the stir of the grain,
listen up for the wind
and did not gather straws
still green in the earth
for a broom,
not set the soft stalks to dry
and bind them
in a gold bundle,
and did not lash a wooden stick
to the yellow skirt
till I had a broom for the paths?
So it went.
How did my life
get by
without seeing, and learning,
and gathering and binding
the basic things?
It's too late to deny
I had the time,
the time,
yet the hands were lacking,
so how could I aim
for greatness
if I was never able
to make
a broom,
not one,
not even one?
Today's Progressive Poem line is here. Mine is tomorrow!
It is something to ponder, we who believe we are so capable who cannot, or did not ever "and did not lash a wooden stick
ReplyDeleteto the yellow skirt". Thanks, Ruth.
What a fantastic project, Ruth--or rather UnProject, a bit like mine. I'm sorry I'm just realizing there's something to follow along with here, but I came on the absolute right day: Neruda! Writer's guilt! Respect of "gathering and binding the basic things".
ReplyDeleteYour taste is--well, like mine. : )
I so love this. And love that we have read some of the same books this year too! I adored JOYFUL and am still thinking about it. xx
ReplyDeleteI love this poem! We just finished reading The Dreamer, about Pable Neruda and are enjoying learning some of his poems. I will share this with the kids.
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