Thursday, January 31, 2019

Poetry Friday: Absences

It's not snowing where I live, but it's snowing in many of the places where my friends and family members live right now, and I'm seeing photos of cold and shivery days on social media. I like the way Donald Justice describes absence in this poem, the lack of color, the lack of flowers, the lack of sound. This poem feels like waiting and silence and, well, absence.
(My daughter took this photo a couple of years ago and sent it to me from her own frozen landscape.)


Absences
by Donald Justice

It's snowing this afternoon and there are no flowers.
There is only this sound of falling, quiet and remote,
Like the memory of scales descending the white keys
Of a childhood piano—outside the window, palms!
And the heavy head of the cereus, inclining,
Soon to let down its white or yellow-white.

Now, only these poor snow-flowers in a heap,
Like the memory of a white dress cast down . . .
So much has fallen.
                                    And I, who have listened for a step
All afternoon, hear it now, but already falling away,
Already in memory. And the terrible scales descending
On the silent piano; the snow; and the absent flowers
      abounding.


You can read this poem and more by Donald Justice here.

Tabatha has the roundup today.

10 comments:

Molly Hogan said...

There is such a strong mood to this poem. To me it speaks of loss. Eloquently. Thank you for introducing me to this poet and this poem.

Linda B said...

How can we know how others are inspired when they look out and see snow unless they write? This is a melancholy look, full of the snowy day in a different way, and beautiful, Ruth. "Absence" is a perfect word for it. Thank you!

Jone said...

Gorgeous... I would love some snow here. It’s such an evocative poem.

Mary Lee said...

We had that kind of silence this morning while it was still snowing and before the snow trucks were roaring and scraping.

Linda Mitchell said...

I love the whole idea of writing what’s not there..the negative space of life. The listening for the step...the lonely observer

Tara Smith said...

I love the silence of the snow, but marrying it to absence makes that silence something different altogether. As Molly said, such a strong mood to this poem.

Tabatha said...

That last stanza. I can see pairing this with "The Layers" by Stanley Kunitz, although it has no snow, just dust, wind, and clouds.

Heidi Mordhorst said...

"scales descending the white keys" -- heavy nothingness coming down, but musically. Lovely. Do you miss the cold and snow? Is the photo from Chicago?

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Ruth said...

Heidi, I don't miss it. Looking at photos is enough for me. Yes, the photo is from near Chicago. The workshop looks great. :-)

Michelle Kogan said...

I saw the snow on the branches as "snow-flowers" before reading the poem–how lovely and still they are as Justice captures all of this in his poem, thanks Ruth.